This is so poignant!
Beautifully written and such a powerful image at the end when Peter channels his experiences as High King.

Thank you!

Awwwww... I loved that! :)

ahhwow. lovely piece. i loved this. some things are deep, and others are much deeper, yet at the same time so much shallower. this was short, sweet, yet powerful. wonderful, wonderful work.

This is powerful. I have no words.

Great story.

May the Three Friends smile upon your path

Oooh I really liked this :D

This short little story was beautiful! I love the idea of their parents realizing something was different about their children - that they were more mature, wise, regal beyond their years. You portrayed it really well! I'd love to read another Narnia fic from you! Please?

That was nice, how you brought back the High King into England. It was very sweet. Thank you for posting it.
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Beautiful, though I often think that expressions being so easily read, it feels natural here- that bit about Peter's expression being the same as a comrades is good.

Ooh, you have brought back some small flare of my Narnian inspiration! It is a tiny, fingerling of an ember, almost ashes, but it exists and I hope it catches to burn brighter. Thanks for something so wonderful and amazing!

WH

Wow. This was amazing! While I was reading this, I wasn't sure if I wanted to cry, or smile; my feels couldn't decide. You are a fabulous writer, and I loved the depth of the emotions in this oneshot. Thank you for writing this! ;)

deep .

Wonderful, heartfelt. Thank you for that little ray of Narnian sunshine.

That was entirely too short, but that's the only thing I can find fault with. That was a really great idea-if anyone would notice the difference in the Pevensie children after they'd come back from Narnia, it would be their parents. You wrote it really well, too-I could see the scene unfolding in front of me.
Great job!

Can you write another Narnia fanfic? This one was amazing!