Beautiful! Thanks so much

Oh I already love this story.

I really enjoyed having more of Draco and Hermoine and I found the addition of Neville and Vincent to be great.

Well this story ended abruptly. Seems like there was more to tell, I guess we are to infer that it all worked out?

:-)

I will readily admit how much I enjoyed this little ficlet. Snape's punishment for Hermione and Draco was well designed and the reactions of all parties was reasonable. I particularly enjoyed Hermione's initial approach of using positive reinforcement ala chocolate frogs. Inspired! Thank you for the read. KTN

love this story hope you finish it

I just hate it when I am reading a really good story and all of the sudden it says The End or finish. It's maddening.

Oh yeah, this thing has many parts. Wish you had left the name of the n ext one here.

Um, I'm... rather confused. The first story said it started second year, but then there's mention of Hermione punching Draco, and then the ferret-thing. I know the AN-1 said some events would be out of order, but I sort of assumed it would be on a per-year/book basis, not all of the biggest events in the series put into a time blender set to puree... it's not bad (your writing is amazing), but it is very, very jarring...

amazing!

Heh! I think Snapes got it a bit wrong. I mean, Hermione is cheating only to get Snapes book back for him ( and for her to stay alive at Hogwarts. )

Oh this is wonderful! I love Snapes way of punishing the two for not doing their best and stealing a book. I also love how the two were able to help Crabbe and Neville

This story was absolutely adorable. I love it when fan fiction delves into interactions with more minor characters and brings them to life. I haven't read "Find a Family" or anything else in its universe but I like this as a standalone.

Again, you have delivered an excellent story! On to the third installment I go!

This story is so nice! :)

I think Snape is blaming the victim.