Reviews for Rise of the Valiant |
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Arthurian knight chapter 7 . 2/10/2010 Great battle. I've always thought Thomas would deflect seeing him as honourable. And it looks like Ramza got two admirers. Hoping to see what will happen. I REALLY hope you're not going to abandon this story. UPDATE SOON! |
Arthurian knight chapter 6 . 2/10/2010 Wow, some RamzaxAgris. That's nice. I think is is one of the best stories I've read so far. |
Arthurian knight chapter 4 . 2/10/2010 Great battle scene! I'm really surprised that there are so few reviews! Well I hope to fill some of them. ;) |
Arthurian knight chapter 2 . 2/10/2010 So Ruvelia is still alive? Somehow I have a feeling she will die |
Arthurian knight chapter 1 . 2/10/2010 Hell of a good start |
BasilAbdef chapter 1 . 11/17/2008 If this piece of shit story is "perfection", I'd hate to read what you consider bad. |
tenderkindwar chapter 7 . 10/12/2008 again, very well done! though i have to ask, is there any intent on someone having ragnorok? (the sword you get only for the final fight) |
kuro-ninpou28 chapter 7 . 9/21/2008 Conspiracies and violence, two of the core elements of Final Fantasy Tactics, or any other Final Fantasy games. |
kuro-ninpou28 chapter 6 . 9/21/2008 i admit that i am a huge fan of the Ramza and Agrias pairing (Reluctant Hero is the other fic in FFT that I have my eyes on, and I have ruthlessly searched and read any and all fics with this pairing), and I hope that there will be one. But you are the author, and what you think is right will be right. I will continue reading regardless, the pairing would be a plus. |
kuro-ninpou28 chapter 5 . 9/21/2008 now things are getting more interesting. can i hinder a guess and say that Ramza's class is that of a ninja? or is he only using the two handed sword style whilst being of a different class? |
kuro-ninpou28 chapter 4 . 9/21/2008 ahh, action at last, I must say that the action scenes are well done. |
kuro-ninpou28 chapter 3 . 9/21/2008 Though still more of a background history, however this is a necessary chap i'm sure. |
shon chapter 7 . 9/10/2008 Another great chapter. Some of the wording was weird (like saying something along the lines of it mattering little I believe three times in the first half of the fic). There is nothing wrong with it, just a little thing I try to avoid when I write papers and such. This chapter kept my attention the whole way through, I didn't even knowtice the passage of time as I read this, plus I enjoyed the little surprise at the end. Keep it up! |
shon chapter 6 . 9/8/2008 Great chapter and quite a cliff hanger... darn it :) I didn't see anything grammatically wrong.. Keep up the good work! |
shon chapter 5 . 8/29/2008 Its funny, I got home today and said to myself, "man, I have a hankerin' for FFT" and behold, you updated! This chapter was faster paced which I liked. There were some sentencing mistakes, but nothing that I couldn't understand what you were saying. ex: Magrat to Kappa "...the reason for my visit is you ask you..." |