Reviews for The Forgotten Character: Leah's Story
Mary Alice lovepuppies chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
i thought this was going to be a bitter sweet oneshot. I was so happy seeing the rest of the chapters and that it was completed
Scathing reviewer chapter 7 . 10/14/2017
So, I really don't like Armand. What's to like? He's a smarmy lying vamp, and that's what's putting me off about him -I said to myself last chapter. But then, after I read the convo between Leah and Seth, I think that my dislike has more to do with the fact that this is literally the first person leah has come across since running away. And not only is it a vampire; it's a /mysterious/ vampire, a friendly, seemingly vegan vampire, a unique and /special/ vampire. Because they're just so common. If this OC was a girl, everyone would be talking about Mary Sue's. But the story must go on.
Aiyanna Clearwater chapter 3 . 5/25/2017
Leah should've asked Jacob if he would be OK with Billy starting a romance with Esme. People are always full of good advice when a situation doesn't primarily involve them. Of course since she's a good cook, he probably wouldn't care. :D
Red Swarm chapter 17 . 3/27/2016
I just discovered this. I think it's a really cool story.
brankel1 chapter 17 . 9/28/2015
Amazing.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/29/2015
Uh, I think Leah imprinting on a vamp falls under 'random twists'.
samasbananas chapter 5 . 2/23/2012
Adorable :3
samasbananas chapter 4 . 2/23/2012
Leah! TTTT

I would be completely upset if anything remotely close to this would happen to me :3
samasbananas chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
Ha! Good luck Leah! She could never be like Seth... :3
samasbananas chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Awww... poor Leah. You're right, Leah's the only character (that I absolutely love) that didn't get a happy ending :

:3
silverwolf3949 chapter 17 . 6/15/2011
I loved the fanfic! Leah did deserve to get 'her happy ending'. I loved how she found strength knowing armand loved her. And a great ending too! I hope u write more like these. What was the readon for the delayed imprinting?
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 17 . 12/7/2010
Great work! I was surprised that Leah imprinted on a vampire, since she hates them so much, but it worked out. However, you had so much Leah-Nessie interaction in the beginning, before Leah ran away, and then absolutely none in the end. I thought that the Nessie-hand-flashback would imply that Leah was in love in Jacob, not just upset in general!
kimono12356 chapter 8 . 6/23/2010
If Armand is in fact wearing contacts it would actually melt due to they're eyes have venom to replace tears since they are vampires. But it is a good story nonetheless.
jacobblackismineduh chapter 17 . 5/22/2010
OH MY GOSH! That was so cute! Wow. I give you a standing ovation! :)
jacobblackismineduh chapter 16 . 5/22/2010
Awh :) Their love for eachother! Neither can die!
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