Reviews for The Forgotten Character: Leah's Story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i thought this was going to be a bitter sweet oneshot. I was so happy seeing the rest of the chapters and that it was completed |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I really don't like Armand. What's to like? He's a smarmy lying vamp, and that's what's putting me off about him -I said to myself last chapter. But then, after I read the convo between Leah and Seth, I think that my dislike has more to do with the fact that this is literally the first person leah has come across since running away. And not only is it a vampire; it's a /mysterious/ vampire, a friendly, seemingly vegan vampire, a unique and /special/ vampire. Because they're just so common. If this OC was a girl, everyone would be talking about Mary Sue's. But the story must go on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Leah should've asked Jacob if he would be OK with Billy starting a romance with Esme. People are always full of good advice when a situation doesn't primarily involve them. Of course since she's a good cook, he probably wouldn't care. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just discovered this. I think it's a really cool story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. |
![]() ![]() Uh, I think Leah imprinting on a vamp falls under 'random twists'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Leah! TTTT I would be completely upset if anything remotely close to this would happen to me :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! Good luck Leah! She could never be like Seth... :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... poor Leah. You're right, Leah's the only character (that I absolutely love) that didn't get a happy ending : :3 |
![]() ![]() I loved the fanfic! Leah did deserve to get 'her happy ending'. I loved how she found strength knowing armand loved her. And a great ending too! I hope u write more like these. What was the readon for the delayed imprinting? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work! I was surprised that Leah imprinted on a vampire, since she hates them so much, but it worked out. However, you had so much Leah-Nessie interaction in the beginning, before Leah ran away, and then absolutely none in the end. I thought that the Nessie-hand-flashback would imply that Leah was in love in Jacob, not just upset in general! |
![]() ![]() If Armand is in fact wearing contacts it would actually melt due to they're eyes have venom to replace tears since they are vampires. But it is a good story nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH! That was so cute! Wow. I give you a standing ovation! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awh :) Their love for eachother! Neither can die! |