Me gusto de principio a fin, no se si puedas pero podrias sacar al menos un omake de la vida de Zuko y Toph teniendo a su bebe en los años hasta que vuelva el dragon?
PD: haras mas historias de Zuko X Toph? :v

I like ve all of your work and have reread your stipends several times, and just felt like commenting to tell you how good of a writer you really are. I hope you appreciate the skills you have and have continued to do what you love, no matter where it took you. With all the best wishes, fanofiction.

Five years XD I finished this and it's prequel today, and I just want to say that I love this. I love how you wrote the characters, their weaknesses, their relations with others, it was amazing. And the ending! It was absolutely perfect.

I can't find the next sequel did u take it down or am I just not looking in the right places

I just thought I'd drop my review here since I've got to head off to work in a bit and I'd probably forget to do so otherwise.

Originally I didn't think I was going to enjoy this series. The title had kind of turned me off (XY 2), and when I started the first story the beginning seemed to me like it would be a typically bad written postcanon romance. But it wasn't bad actually.

Your writing and world building is good, so the assets are all here.

The things that bother me and need a touch of mentioning are really only your use of "sweetie" and "baby", which are nicknames I don't think anyone uses anymore if they ever seriously did. Remember that these characters already have nicknames for each other, (ex: Sparky) and since both Zuko and Toph are pretty rough and tumble kind of people I wouldn't anticipate them being so sugary all the time.

Which kind of leads into my next point that they seemed to get feelings and confess them to each other pretty quickly. Your pacing in terms of the story itself is good, but in terms of romance for Zuko and Toph (and now Mai and Jet) it feels hella rushed. Mai and Jet were making out on like the second day, and Zuko was behaving like a jealous lover from day one - which happens sometimes - rarely-, but feels like you're using it as a template for all romance here.

Jet And Mia I like it :)

The toko moments were so cute I can't wait for the gang to be back together

Wow that was even better than the first! I loved the length and premise, at first i hated how you made Jet a bender but the more i read the more it just made so much sense! keep up the good work!

This is my first review on fanfiction. EVER. Hope i'm doing this right.
First of all, I enjoyed this two stories of yours greatly and i might be a big Toko fan now.
Second I'm writing this review before reading Bender which is a sequel to this (I hope) so i might say somethings ungrateful.
So... I would like to scream YEEEEEES. That's how i feel after reading this last chapter. I loved all the little touches you made like the Dragons and such. Though making Toph a little bit overpowered flinched me a little. But that didn't bother me enough to enjoy this two stories of yours. All i wanna say is that, Thank You for writing this stories, Thank You for giving me the opportunity to read this stories by posting this story on fanfiction. I don't know if you'll read this review or not. But i wanna say that I Love You for writing this beautiful stories. :3

That was great omg I loved the dragons it was like omg I love the avatar stuff you do and the dragons was the nicest touch ever thank you so much

hi gal when will you start to write the new story of the last sky bison really enjoyed the previous 3 stories keep it up . u are the only one i have seen really write it well

Aww

I love ToKo

I've seen Ruby Falls (I'm an Alabama girl, born in Attalla) and Cathedral Caverns sound great. I'll check it out sometime. You're an amazing writer. I'm so glad we've got good writers on the Zuko/Toph ship. It's not a hugely popular pairing, so thanks again for writing. We ZuToph fans all appreciate! :)

Another great, solid piece, though there was a lot less ToKo than I would have liked :) Still, great character development for Jet! Thanks for this.