this is amazing, please updateeee

Please carry on with this. I’m really enjoying it and I wanna read what happens next

Oh, i love this story so much. Please can you come back and continue this story?

I really like this fic so far but what still bothers me is that THIS FAR IN and Susan is still fickle about Caspian. One chapter she loves him and wants him to care the next she lashes out at him. Same with Caspian. We know that they love each other so why are they still so bipolar! And also, one of these days Caspian needs to just tell Susan that he's worried that the Narnians want her more than him, and finally get that going. Lastly, time to get some actual progress towards dethroning Miraz going! Like I said; I do really like this fix, but it's been 28 super long chapters and not much has happened plot wise. Sure a lot of 'character development' has occurred, but things that actually contribute to the main goal of winning the war haven't.

I soooooo cant believe you are updating! Are you gonna change the story line too?

I'm fine with a revamp, but it might be a better idea to start a new story rather than posting the new chapters under the old one.

Ive loved this story since then beginning. Does this mean you plan on possible writing more/finishing it once the revamps are done? Cause that would rock :)

Nice to see you again my friend!

Ah this is truly marvelous..glad you are back

This is one of my favourite stories, ever. I'm so happy you are in the process of re-working it and haven't abandoned it. I'm really excited about it and will follow closely your updates.

Really nice. I like it a lot.

Hey! This is really nice. I love it.

Poor poor Caspian ( hope that susan could help him to see what it is right

Well this is a dark caspian so we know that something like this will come but... continue it please

I really like how you write and it is good to find a fic of a dark caspian sometimes _