Reviews for When You Look
Mona chapter 1 . 1/28
Gosh you got me in tears I literally said "no" out loud because you killed the babies
sarah chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
This is soo Sad I cried
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Ahh. You just killed me. You just stabbed me in the heart and freaking killed me.
That was so sad...but beautiful. I loved it, in a weird, heartbreaking way.
Good job. Please excuse me while I dry my eyes and remove the knife from my chest.
ortonambrosecenangel chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
aww that was really sad but it was really good. great job
tiamat100 chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
That is so sad and beautiful that I nearly cried. It's brilliantly written and it really did make my sister cry. It's beautiful.
Dan chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Hahaha! I don't think so...

Just...YUCK!

The grammar was quite good, but I didn't like the "moral" of the story per se...
Trakrat chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
... omg, that was so sad!
Jasper Winter Mory chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Courtney...I cried...that was so sad! Why why why! I love it too much to hate it, but it's sad...