That was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

Your sentences a bit odd, and there are run-on sentences and blatant lacks of commas, but it's all overshadowed by this amazing masterpiece. I'm so glad I found this today - I really, really am. Please keep writing; the world will thank you.

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So cute! and so sad...good job, very nicely written...*crys*

Excellent. Great job with the improvements/edits!

That was sweet. The idea of her story being more important than the actual people in it was kind of interesting. I especially loved the thought of her story being remembered after she died when the people remembering were so prone to forgetting everything else.