That was great.

That was a wonderful little story. Peter is a bastard and deserved to be locked away. I'm so glad the boys were honest with one another and in turn were able to be honest with their friends and family. Life is good in Santa Fe. :)

this was so cute. i just had to go aw. loved it

that was great

This is realy good. If this is the end you should definatly write a sequal.

this is so amazing.

*loves*

Aw man, poor David...Even though Peter sounds like a little brat, I like him. You developed him very well. I hope you write more to this story, it's sounding pretty good so far. I'd like to see what would happen, like if David cracks and tells Jack everything. If this is the end, then I say good job.