honestly your own version of okami here leaves a bad taste in the mouth and she is a pretentious little shit! if the really considers Kyoko as her mother then when she got abused like this she would move into high waters to get justice for her and won't think about what the restaurant's reputation. in the first place I can feel that her concern for Kyoko here is only skin deep and not really to a point that she really cares for her well being. anyways because of my opinions of this story... I might not finish it coz I'm just going to be annoyed. sorry for being blunt like this, believe me I'm not flaming you but I just couldn't keep quiet about this.

I like this chapter!

Out of all the Skip Beat fanfic I have read, there are very few that have Ren ask Kyoko if he can kiss her. While in this case it brought on some PTSD, it did it's job in putting a stopper on Kyoko's typical extreme denial of Ren's feelings that we see so often. It was an excellent way of helping her understand his feelings. It was an excellent chapter.

I am SO glad to read the rest of this chapter! It really is worth the wait. and THANK YOU for the special mention _

Next chap

This chapter's got some heavy stuff, I didn't know I was holding my breath while reading it! I got something else to do, but damn, I NEED to read the next chapter!

Anyway, I apologize for being another reviewer who pointed out a typo when it's already fixed from this chapter and beyond. I still love your work 3 3 3

Just started reading this story of yours, and I really like where this is going. You are such an amazing writer! Everything flows really well.

Anyway, I think you misspelled Ren's surname? I kept seeing 'Tsugura'.

Please update this asap! I need my ren x kyoko fix since the manga doesn't seem to get anywhere with that now. Also this story is amazing and I do hope that ren n kyoko eventually get have some fun finally. Lol

5/5 stars. You got me hooked and I'm super need of another chapter!

Ah! O fim desse capítulo me deixou extremamente curiosa para saber o que irá acontecer em seguida!

Poor Kyouko just wants to keep working! Ren, you'd better let her call Maria and get the heck back to bed. No interrogations tonight. Maybe.

Yeah, why she lie to the police? 0.o if it not an incident, and was premeditated, why lie, kyoko-chan? ;-; plsss I'm still here o/ don't take to long to updated ;-;

oh no what a cliff hanger

mogami san and tusgura san

Please update! I think this story is quite promising!

interesting, can't wait to find out who is behind all the mishaps. looking forward to next installment.