Beautiful. This is art. Your writing was delicate and descriptive. I loved this.

I really love how you capture the characters last moments and provide a sense of tranquility at the end of the chapter as they fade away. Please keep writing this!

Oh my gosh! D': This was so beautiful I almost cried! You know that feeling when a story is so good you get graphical images to it similar to those of a movie? Well, I had that :') I read all chapters and I have to say I liked Sasori's the most...and Hidan's the least if you care. I don't know, it just seemed so gloomy and boring, unlike the others. Oh, and I also loved Deidara's and Kakuzu's...Kakuzu's was first depressing but then gave me hope, at that part where the ground bloomed after his footsteps! Itachi's was nicely calming as if I had felt his emotions. Nagato's was also great but it was also rather strange and I didn't seem to fully understand it :/
LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE!

Aren't more a them dead now?
Your writing is beautiful. I think I've only read humour stories of yours so far (which are hilarious and great), and this is really stunning. I wish I could write like you _

So sad.. TTTT I loved it nevertheless.

why did you stop writing

Great Job! Keep writing!

I particularly liked this one- it seems right for Deidara to go out laughing. Great job!

Now it is Konan's turn

I really love these stories. They're just so wonderful, and for some reason they made me smile. Probably because they showed that Akatsuki got happiness in the end or something… Anyway, I look forward to read any other chapters you add '

First, before I review my thoughts on this, I gotta say: Please don't bother to respond to my feedback via PM because I can't check my e-mail atm anyway xD Sorry, most authors just try to so yeah, heh.

Anyway, I liked this chapter on Sasori's dream. It was touching to see this Sasori who thought fleeting art was also impressive and beautiful. Nice how Deidara was there to bid him farewell into the afterlife, as well. Might be because I was listening to a soothing OST of Final Fantasy XIII but there was this calm, pacifying aura about this chapter. It was good! :)

wow these r really good! i think itachi's was the best so far hmm

I read all of these at once. And if I may say so, they are all really good! Oh, and I bet that Konan will be up next!

Keep up the good work and update soon!

I love this! Akatsuki had the most bad-ass characters is naruto! I really miss them. But now you need to do kisame's death, and then konan. I hate madara for killing konan... she was my anime idol. She's so kick-ass...

I like these. Makes me almost forget the horrendous things that Kishimoto has been doing to Akatsuki lately.