That was truly Amazing. I have never read a story that was chock-full with great information and written so well. I loved how subtle the FamilyFluff was, yet left me feeling high on fluffy familial clouds. I'm so glad I found your story. I enjoyed it immensely.

Bravo!

I feel like I cant explain the emotions I felt while reading this story. As soon I read the first chapter I knew that there was no way I was going to stop. I hope that you continue to write more about Jasper/Leah.

Beautiful story

I loved this. This is the few fanfics I have come across in the Twiverse that has directly focused on racial perspectives and tensions in cannon. A few have dealt wirh some themes, but this was just so interesting. The juxtaposition of what and who Jasper represented, his personal journey on recovering his humanity and how that was a journey to connection with others who were different than he was.

A few others have kicked around the ideas of general sexism within the vampires and the fannon ideas of mates. But this was in a league of its own.

I am definitely going to be perusing your other stories.

This is well written and deserves more reviews than it has.

But i understand why some would not finish it or review

The Cowboy and The Indian. The characteristics of the two was distinctively shown (from my knowledge - as I myself am a New Yorker), which I loved. I did notice that the stories in this fandom usually glosses over the fact that yes, she's a member of the Native American society. (Probably resulting from the fact that the writers here make everything westernized, which I suppose can't be helped, since Twilight itself was westernized.) While I came here expecting a JasperxLeah story, I was surprised to find a fine story such as this one.

What a beautiful story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end, despite my lack of formal education.

It was wonderful how you put it together "not in order" and I had no trouble keeping up.

Lovely, lovely story.

Nice chapter again. It was very emotional and the language you used was fantastic. But you're actually not supposed to go under an overpass during a tornado. Going under an overpass can actually make the problem worse, because the structure of the overpass can actually make the winds under it go faster, putting you in more danger. You're recommended to either find a sturdy building to stay in or get out of the car and try to lie flat in a ditch (while protecting your head and neck with your arms). The overpass thing used to be recommended due to a new story (and video) in the '90s where people survived a very weak tornado by going under an overpass, but the theory was disproven later and it now considered more dangerous. Not to say that their decision was a bad one given the limited information they had, but it's generally not what you're supposed to in face of a tornado.

Anyway, good chapter and good luck.

Just one thing, I think you meant "too young" when you had Leah say that she was "too old to be so cynical", children are not exactly known for being cynical. Other than that, good chapter, you gave me some books to check out.

This story is absolutely perfect.

This is very interesting and different then the normal plot. I personally love how you have started it off and the use of books and "searching" as the start of their relationship is refreshing in a plot point of view when compared to other stories. I am excited to see where this go.

Not quite as much as what happened to Jasper, but I choked up a little when he found the garves of his human family. That was such a nice thing for Leah to do for him. I really like the relationship that has grown between the cowboy and the Indian. Great story,too!

They are growing closer and more comfortable with each other by the day. Funny how it seems so natural to me, to be reading about two vampires and two werewolves driving cross country.

I really like the way they are with each other, and it seems to be growing and getting better. This journey to Texas has been sort of like a quest, in a way.

I'm just an old woman with a bent sense of humor, but that was a lot of fun! From the sound of it, all four of them enjoyed it, too!