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Write a chapter where Vegeta has gf (or bf) and he loses his virginity, please.

Just hear to confirm that I read it! ahah

I think this story kind of lost its purpose. It was about Vegeta and Frieza, which I liked. Now its about Zarbon and Radditz and stuff. idk man. i aint feelin it.

this is a great story and i cant wait for the sequel

please update this story soon, with more Brolly :)

An interesting chapter. I look forward to seeing where you plan to take this story next.

A very interesting chapter. It's good to see that Frieza doesn't hold Tori's actions against her family. Good work with this chapter.

Hi! It's me again, confirming I read this. I guess you could start a new story, but this is fine too. Now all the people who subbed this story will get a notice. If you start a new one they won't. x Erica

Just reviewing to confirm that I read it! :P x

Very nice chapter. It's interesting to see your take on Brolly's transformation. Good work with showing the toll Jess' death took on the whole family. I imagine it would be especially hard for Brolly. Speaking of him, it's nice to see how Frieza is dealing with Brolly and wanting him to have a normal childhood. Great work with this chapter.

Oh no! Not Jess. If Tori is not dead yet, I think it's easy to assume that she will be soon. I don't think Frieza would just let that go. This does add some good drama to your story. Keep up the good work.

This is an interesting turn of events. It's nice that you make Frieza a decent guy when it concerns his family and the fact that he's willing to let Vegeta know the truth about his mother gives his character some more depth. Good work with this chapter.

oh no jess, what was tori thinking. this is going to probably scar brolly, please update soon