amazing story. please continue.

Wow, this story is pretty original. I hope to read all of it

what does this story have to do with azula?

You could use a beta reader for help with the punctuation at times, but generally I love your plot. The story moves forward very well, though I am rather skeptical at Azula being nice, or coming out of her insanity so quickly to collaborate with the 3 main people who brought her down, even if it was to help the twins. Still, your story flows very well, so good job.

i have to say i dont get worked up much over fan fic's i have even been called a hard ass but this story is something that even has me shedding a tear every now and then but i am a sucker for love and loss and how people that are damaged almost to the point of no return and finding something to hold on to

I've been reading this story and am incredibly imersed in it. NOW HOW DOES IT END?

Hooray another chapter! Worth the wait.

You finally updated. Nice chapter.

Please finsh this story the suspense is killing me. Also please fix the spelling and grammatical errors.

Your OC is a bit too Gary-Stuish for my taste...

I was Great

I really liked this story, its great. I like the Xi'an X Azula, this is really good, I hope there is going to be other chapters, I'm looking forward to it. This also my first review.

I like this story I have been reading certein chpaters off and on and just now finsihed reading the whole thing. I hope you will update soon I like the change that Azula is going through and want to see what happens with her and Xi'an and the twins.

More, please! Really. This stuff is pretty good. Love it.

Epic!