DO NOT LISTEN TO INUYASHA

Sooooooooooo awesomeness awesome perfect story. I really enjoyed it.

Ok, i know this story is old but i just had to tell you i loved them. I really loved them. The were funny and entertaining and the fluff was just suffocatingly sweet and awesome. Just wow.

Hahaha, you friend's name is mephisto!? Haha, you are friend with the devil!

It was a great story. Since you asked I would like to say it was a little short fro being a week. You could have added more detail and drawn it out more. It was great any way. :)

THAT WAS AMAZING! You got me addicted and it's only chapter 1.

YES! that was a great story and thatn you so muck for writghting it!

HEY! i LOVE this story so far adn sorry i havent revues in the previous chapters... i just dident want to stop reading! this chapetr was awsome and 6 flags is really fun i think! have you ever been there in reall life? i have and it is really fun. i too am scared of the "SCREAM" or in your story the "GIANT DROP" also my favorite roler coster is the super man and raddeler too! thahanks again!

Sooooooooo good! That was your first? Very impressive. I love it! :)

I love it how your so cruel to Hojo! I would be doing the exact same thing. I'm cracking up as I read this, becuase all of the characters are so... so... just them. You know? Like, you kept their personalities intact, unlike some people who make them nothing like the originals. So way to go! Sooooo loving this!

NOOOOO! It's over! DDx

But it was SUCH a GREAT story, I will probably return to read it again! :D

Thank you and GREAT job! LOVED it! ;D

Cute~!

CUUUUTE!

AWWWW! SO CUTE! ;3 ## Love it!

sorry for the late review, excellent story and i completely loved reading this

keep up the great writing skills :D