Haha i love the tardis

Loved the different bathroom adventures.

PLEASE write more. You are a wonderful author and I love your stories. (Although there does need to be a more steady plot line c: )

Oh, and ignore that other bitchy guest reviewer of yours.

Stop saying Rose is always storming out for an exit... To redundant

Seriously? A Dalek doesn't say 'Thank you,' not does the Doctor not freak out, grab his Sonic, scream, or grasp for Rose's hand or for an embrace to keep her safe. Usually the Dalek goes crazy and insane to kill the Doctor, creating the daleks rays. Even with one, it would've killed them without questions.

You made it happen WAY to quickly. I was thinking it could be like they're try hiding their love away (oi, that's a Beatles tune 3 )and after a few chapters they notice they can't stand the friend zone. Something slow, otherwise it's too rushed. The more detailed and slower it is, the more apprehensiveness and longing the reader has, wanting more, and ending up reading the whole thing. A good amount, making the reader read it when they're bored, not obsessive about it. Too slow, the readers will be like, 'Oh, okay, they didn't know they liked each other and then they kiss way to quickly, seemingly long but obviously not, and now they're together... No. Not how it works hun!' Which is how I am at the moment. Not even a stutter of nervousness from this socially awkward sexy man? Seriously? Otherwise, the plot is great. Just, work in sensory and stuff because I'm not having good feels right now. My ship feels empty without longing.

Welllll, here's a long review that you may possibly but probably won't weep over:
This story...I started reading it, initially thinking, "30 chapters about bathrooms?"
Now, it's one of those stories that I will always revisit, reread, and remember the thriller of reading it for the first time. It was just so beautiful! The ups and downs, the kisses and tears, and everything in between. Thank you so much for this story. It was absolutely FANTASTIC. :')
Allons-y!
-ATR

IF YOU SONT MAKE THIS A HAPPILY EVER AFYER O WILL FUXKING WXTERMINATE YOU TO DEATH

NOOOOOOOOOOO FUCK FUCK FUCK NOOOOOOOOOO YOU TROLL WHY CANT YOU JIST LET THEM HVE A HAPPY ENDING

I love Torchwood, but...
THE LOVE OF HER LIFE

BU
THE DOCTOR

Ianto is evil

It is sooooo Mickey

AAA. A