Reviews for First Time
Meghan-Black01 chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
** OH MY GOSH! :D
yoime chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
You know, I kinda adore you, since you have done a lot of LxLight ones. And thess two oneshots, firt kiss and first time, were lovely -and smexy- Soo, thanks for the reading!
deathlymad chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
*claps for sequel* If only there was a sequel to the sequel...!

But yeah. This was all very sweet and nice and light, until the end. XD But I don't think the ending was angst, exactly. I still thought it was kind of sweet.

-Ri
Art-Of-Escape chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Awww that was both really arousing and a bit sad.
BriFMAluver chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Beautiful, just beautiful. I swear! You make everything so...AMAZING with your writing! The way that they can reach such euphoria without shedding one piece of clothing is written so believably and wonderfully! Ah and the ending, so sad ( But what makes me even more unhappy is that there is no sequel to this delightfully loving/angsty/smutty piece of brilliance! But you are the author, and I am satisfied with both this and its prequel. ] Keep up the genius!
deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Yeay! Arn't we all.(perverts I mean) heehee

I really LOVE! this story!
HollyJollyXmas chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
This fanfiction REALLY turned me on! If I rape the closest person, I blame you.

L uke is so adorable!
Dotti55 chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Oh yes I did so enjoy that. I do hate seeing l so confused though - he'll think of something I'm sure. I live for these stories - and the more AU the better - Death Note - though I love it dearly - depresses the hell out of me - I live here in the fiction world where L and Light not only live - but live and love each other - thanks for another glimpse of the world I wish they were in!
Corkboard chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
I'm really sorry to have to reply to your PM here but for some unknown reason ff . net seems to enjoy stopping me from sending PM's (this isn't the first time it's happened).

Anyway.

I need to know all.

The art of teh pronz.

I don't really want to know how to write romance (as the story I need to know how to write pronz for is not in the least bit romantic).

I'm sorry again to reply here (although I suppose it's more reviews for you, ne?)

Thanks again.

p.s. Sorry to hear about the virus. Is that why your computer kept crashing?
Alexandra chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
That was too sweet! I enjoyed the twist in the end and I think it fit in just perfectly! But will you write another sequel and get rid of the cloths this time? ;)
Cat Streaked By Rain chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Delightfully yummy. Though the end was a bit sad/emo-ish. Very good anyway. .
youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
oh, ouch. i loved the little thread of angst you weaved throughout this. very nice. and how raito lets L top! how cute! it was cute and depressing and lovely and smutty, all at once! bravo.
evhein chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
as usual, i enjoyed it, but it was different this time.

i mean, the style was the same, of course, but it was still different...

i got it!

it was much hotter than what i've read from you before. if you keep this up, my favs from you might change from hichi!ichi to l!light.

wouldn't want that to happen. lol

i can't wait for you to somehow continue this... not that it doesn't fit for an ending as it is... but a continuation from the two would be nice, seeing as you're obviously on to something.
Tunazap chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
I loved the angst at the end.
Invader-Nehima chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
That was great! -squeal-

Ah, the scenes you write are always the best ones. This was just..awesome, though. I feel like acting all fangirly and reading 20 more RaitoxL smut fics now.

...Your fics always make me up my smut ratio by, like, 53%. Weird.

Oh, and good luck sleeping! If you stay up 70 hours, you end up just passing out. That's the longest I've ever not slept, though, so beyond that is unknown.

You faithful reader~

-Nehima
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