Good story. Josh was out of character but still good.

This really good

Oh noo I smell trouble

Gotta love the random npc's doing research

One good turn deserves another

Oh this took a sudden turn

I kind liked the idea of this going the tengo route still awesome

I love bad guy Ron so rare ..

Ron a bad guy? Who save Kim? It's an original idea. I've read hundreds of Kim Possible fanficts here. But, I have never come across one of this nature. Sure, there are dozens, where they don't meet until various points later in life, but none where Kim reforms Ron, or Ron reforms her.

You broke the mold and keep the characters how you first presented them, showing how their emotions evolved with each new experience, until they started to develop feelings for one another. Few writers on here show such potential. But, you did.

I give your story 5-stars. It's held my interest. It was past 11:30 at night. I couldn't close my tablet until I'd finished the last word. Yours was a refreshing story, not a rehash of someone else's work. Keep up the good stories, you'll entertain many people here.

Y'know I really like protective Ron, he was so worried for Kimmy that he unconsciously beat the living shit out of Monkey Fist. I'm the kind of person who is so focused on ships that I don't even think about my own love life. Oh well nothing we can do about it now.

This is Squish wishing you a most pleasant day,
~ Squish

this is dumb... he stayed behind to watch... and told his secret to dr drakken... pls that the most retard thing ever...

Crap, I went scrambling for a sequel after this, too bad there wasn't one! Overall this was pretty good.

Yeah, I have to agree with an earlier reviewer. The whole Bonnie reaction thing was weird.

Josh seems pretty ooc here, it would make more sense if it was Eric/k...Some how.

Why the heck is everyone planning on raping Kim?

Also I feel pretty bad for Will Du in this for some reason.