| Reviews for There's a First Time For Everything |
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  Dj boy chapter 1 . 2/2/2016 Well, nice story. But having sex before getting married is not that bad. But why outside? |
 LW12 chapter 1 . 6/25/2014 very good |
| Ryuketsu no Hana chapter 1 . 3/9/2011 me encanto tu fic |
| IAmNoLongerOnThisAccount chapter 1 . 2/19/2011 This is such a good Story! |
| Peace Sign Freak chapter 1 . 1/25/2010 I liked how you made Ed and Winry making up excuses for equivalent exchange. I also liked the proposal, I mean it sort of does make sense considering their situation/relationship with each other. I liked it very much. Actually..., I loved it. It was well written, except you misspelled Resembool.(e no i)Other than that, it was great. Great descriptions, just enough. I also liked how you had let readers know how much Ed and Winry loved each other by describing their sexual activity..., not too raw, which is good thing because sometimes it gets TOO intense and gets overwhemlming, scarry, or just plain awkward. Now all I have to do is be inspired by yours and many others' stories to improve my own. Thank you for a delightful story with a nice touch of light up the good work. Have fun all the way with writing! |
| terserah-is-whatever chapter 1 . 4/25/2009 excellent story. . Love it :p |
| samichi no kimitachie chapter 1 . 9/26/2008 nice but quite confusing ... so did they done their first ... not in a bed just infront the pond ? how about granny what's her reaction on that ? |
| The loveless Alchemist chapter 1 . 9/23/2008 AH LOVED! Even though i think that would be rather cold...But whatever your the author! But anyway i loved it! Besides what really matters if they did it outside or in! _ Anyway... I'm gonna have to read your other one soon! _ Alexis |
| Inner-Hollow chapter 1 . 9/11/2008 Good story, loved the lemon! Keep up the good work |
| narusakufan1985 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008 This is a good story. Please make some more. Ed and Winry forever. |
| Ariene-NightShade chapter 1 . 8/4/2008 i really hope that you write more it was really awesome and lots of people procrastinate but as long as they get it done it all good well that what i think atleast good lucky with your writing |
| abandoned-account2234 chapter 1 . 7/28/2008 NO REVIEWS! 0_O y? idk but i know that i enjoyed reading this chpater and hopefully you have more to come:] |
