I don’t know what to say I was almost crying because I love the couple so much and I was so happy that you Incorporated everything from the movies so well can’t wait to see what happened In the next chapters you make,Awesome Job

I hate Susan's mother! All of this happens because of her!

What a stupid woman! I hate Susan's and Lucy's mother! They should never go with her! And they left pour Edmund behind!

Hope you finish this!

Honestly, being a living bib is more of a reason to keep you up at night rather than her wailing..

update nOW

You must take High King Peter the Magnificent seriously when he rides that damn unicorn.

Lol,did you know that 'crys' I'd Welsh for 'shirt'?

Please! She continues writing the history, is very entertaining and has me very put with what is going to happen.

Are you going to add more chapters? This story has me at the edge of my seat! Luv your work! Would it be possible to have more Crystal/Peter? Thanks!

Hi,
I love the history that you made.
I hope that you'll be able to finish it, I would love to know how the war will go, if Peter is really going to die, a lovestory betwen Crystal and Peter (I would love to see Them staying together), and of course I want to know with susan and caspian will stay together in Nárnia with their childs.
I kind os have a question you wrote in this chapter something like caspian and his "wife", I would like you to kind of explain me that.
Well, but you are an amaizing writer, and I hope you to have a lot of plajer while doing it.

PETER AND CRYSTAL PETER AND CRYSTAL PETER AND CRYSTAL PETER AND CRYSTAL

This story is great it grals you and won,t let go I can,t for the next

Nice I like your story can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my gosh I litteraly spent an hour reading this whole story it is so good please update as soon as possible I know it's been a while but I love this story so much.