i think i'm in love.

Well done. I'm not a fan of yaoi by any means, but i like the way that Tseng was portrayed in this story. Good job!

OH MY GOD.

I love this so so much. I am a major Tseng fan, and you did him justice in my eyes. This was well constructed, well worded, and well in terms of descriptive skill. E, it was just... flawless. I can't find anything even moderately critical about it, and I don't think I want to. Thank you for writing this. :)