11 years, RIP story

Your 2 stories are both great. I hope you will one day post the rest of them here.

Screw you for not finishing

ich habs bis hierhin gelesen und es war spannennd. aber sorry, das ist nicht ganz mein universum. lg hayne

I hope you come back to this story some time soon

To bad u stopped writing this fabric it's pretty good. You should return to it whenever u get a chance.

kind of sad hinata isn't apart of the pairing she's my favorite [ but oh well love the story

i really like this story so far.

...forget about deserving burial, they should have at least burned the corpses to prevent a plague.

So, you basically gave Naruto two shitty parents instead of just one. a father who shoved a demon inside him, and a mother who abandoned him after he was born.

It's really unfortunate that this story hasn't been updated in such a long time. I actually think that this is a pretty fantastic story you've got here. You've done a fantastic job with this one, I'll keep my fingers crossed that you'll decide to eventually come back to it.

I know this is old and all, but the way he fought pedomaru here was kinda dumb, we all know that naruto ain't for the swords and this chakra draining move was dumb he could made clones and did a rasenshuriken and outflank pedomaru and the gates the fight just made the blonde look like all posture and no bones. Save this fic and look if it'll ever be updated. As always the OC stuff not a OC but the creations made it worse. The wave was OK though, tsunami was so cute.

I hope you pick this back up sometime soon!

Man. I really enjoyed this story. I wish you could continue but its almost been 10 years so I doubt that will happen. Well the story was good and I wanted more but I guess I'll leave the rest of the story to my imagination.

"If the story you want to read doesn"t exist, you have to write it

IT IS GOOD THE HISTORY I HOPE CONTINUE WITH MORE CHAPTERS