I loved this, but I felt I should tell you it's in the wrong section. "Poison" is written by Chris Wooding. This should be in the "Study Series" section. I was surprised when I saw "Yelena" written in the summary- I thought "there was no Yelena in Poison...was there?" but then I saw Janco and laughed. But don't fret, my dear, you're not the only one. Most of the fanfics in this section are about the Study Series . How sad, I was looking for a good Poison fic... But it's nice to know there are more Study fans than I originally thought. It's such a good series, isn't it?

I liked reading this nonetheless. Keep up the good work,

~Saiai Angel Alchemist

haha loved this. Glad you elaborated on this scene :)

During certain parts u mixed up ari and janco

haha that was excellent! it totally fits with what would have happened, and im glad you kept the actual conversation in there as well/

I like this. Are you going to write more-like janco's first impression of yelena after they get out of the forest?

I wish there were more Study fics out there! I really liked the idea of doing one from Janco's POV (always interesting), especially this scene.

The only thing I found was that I think you accidentally switched around the dialogue in the forest. I think Janco calls her a criminal and Ari defends her. It fits their personalities more. Or, maybe I'm wrong.

Either way, nice fic! Parfett deserves to clean latrines for the rest of his life.

Great story! Liked it from Janco's and Ari's POV.

By the way i've emailed the Fanfic administrators and they have created the category "study series". This category is specially for all the poison study, magic study and fire study fanfics. So you can put all your old and new stories in this category. It does not appear in the normal search yet as no stories have been added to this new category yet. But it is present and you can move your stories into them.

That was really funny! And it matched with the story really well, too. I absolutely LOVED the Poison Study Series, so when I saw a teaser, I immediately read it. It didn't dissapoint. 5 stars! Loves, Nicolina

ps: Janco called Yelena a criminal, though! oops!

*laughs* Such a fun little ficlet!

AH! You did a fabulous job capturing Janco's presonality, and I loved the second to last line. Really well done.

he he! it needs a bit more detail but good in essence

I truly hope you write more for this, and I want you to know if you need an editor, I'll help in whatever way I can. This is the only fanfic I've found for 'Poison Study', and I must add its pretty damn awesome. If you know of any others, I would really appreciate it if you'd let me know.

Pretty good, but this is not the section for Poison Study. There's not an official section, so using the Misc. Books category would get you more views/reviews!

~Padfoot~

i think you should continue. you have a good plot.