Reviews for Temptation |
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Kageyjay chapter 1 . 8/21/2018 This time it was Edward who was clumsy. :D I love the necklace and the significance of the apple. So why did Bella smell strawberries? Hmm? :D |
Jullls chapter 1 . 5/6/2018 I loved! Please, continue I want more, please |
Ballet Obsessed chapter 1 . 9/17/2016 So cute! I love it! 3 |
NidhiZala chapter 1 . 1/3/2016 I loved it. Especially the last line... |
NeverBeenMerelyPretty chapter 1 . 3/27/2014 This is amazing :D I love the last line :-) Great writing :D :D :D |
blank chapter 1 . 5/27/2013 strawberries... ha! luv it- plz write more! |
greenleaves12 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013 Love the story and love the last line! |
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 11/14/2012 cute and funny especially the flour. And just how does he explain the strawberry smell? |
laughsmilex3 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012 3 |
jus2read chapter 1 . 2/17/2011 Aaaaawwwwwww,, Swwweeeettt ))) Luv da finish :p xxx |
letski chapter 1 . 11/13/2010 sweet!..nice! |
patiicm chapter 1 . 9/4/2010 you should continue writing this story. The ending was like a to be continued... you know Amazing just all your other stories |
Cit-Cat Mccoy chapter 1 . 6/19/2010 this was really sweet! |
JRFaab chapter 1 . 5/13/2010 I really liked it. |
bananafox chapter 1 . 5/3/2010 very cute. |