beautiful, just.. beautiful

This packed a hell of a lot of emotion, especially the end. Nicely done!

Oh, gosh, that ending! The whole theme of physicality and the lack of it - I'd never really thought of that before. I can't imagine how frustrating it would be to be unable to physically touch someone who is basically the other half of your soul, not even for a hug. Such skin-hunger is terribly depressing, and you wrote it in such a beautiful and poetic way. I absolutely adore the way you've written this. You portay their relationship in such heartbreaking but heartwarming ways at the same time.

Loved this, absolutely loved it! It was great how you made Yami so insecure with Yugi taking over as the support. The emotion between the two here was almost palpable. 10/10!

Great job!

This oneshot is amazing. I love the dub (I'm probably the only person on this site that likes the dub) but I always thought something was missing from their reunion. It was a big deal on what Yami did, and you filled in the gaps nicely. That part that always gets me is the part where Yugi and Yami duel in the desert. That's my favorite episode-it shows a side to both of them that we don't get to see that often.

Job well done. I loved it.

That's so sweet! It shows how deeply they care for each other without turning it into a yaoi (SCREW YOU PUZZLESHIPPERS! DX). It's refreshing and very nice. You portrayed Yugi (and Yami) very well. :)

Thank you. I enjoyed the end of the fourth season, but always felt the reunion of Yami and Yugi was missing something. You added that something that was needed.

~Anne

O..my goddd D:)

That was so freaking sad and adorable and AHhH!

Yeah the end of that arc made me so pissed because they ha portrayed yami so torn and utterly horrified at yugi's soul taken away (which of course he would have been) and then they completely downplayed and erased any chance reunion they may have had!

Any way!

Your story was absolutely beautiful and you've characterized then both amazingly

I anxiously await to see if you write any other stories

:)

So cute! Very rarely do stories make me feel for the characters through to my fingertips, but yours did. Very well written, please keep up with your writing :)

yugi is just a perfect japanese bundle of awesomeness, isn't he? you can't really find people like him anymore. _-_

brittney

I really have no words to describe this. You portrayed Yugi as well as you portrayed Yami, if not better. Other authors would turn this into yaoi/shounen-ai, especially near the end, but you didn't, and for that, I am deeply grateful. This was so touching, and it shows the readers just how much they mean to each other. I cannot even imagine the emotion that Yugi (and Yami) must have felt after being torn apart and reunited.

Again, fantastic job!

Your story should have been a special episode for the Orichalcos series. Where at the end of the series, it shows Yugi's POV. This story is really deep. And it's now in my favs. Keep up the good work.

This is quite simply one of the best Yugioh fanfics I've ever read, and I can reread and reread it without ever getting sick of it. You convey emotion in these characters so wonderfully. Thank you for writing it!

I think that was one of the best fanfic about Yu-gi-oh I ever read. Because you neither keep to the simple episode lines nor babble about your own stuff. You made the effort to go further, and offered us all the character's feelings. Thank you for that !

Great job, by the way (that was pretty much the spirit of this review, but better to say it straight away )

So beautiful T_T! All this crying almost made me cry myself! This was a REALLY, TRUUUUUUULT Good Fanfic! Good jobb!