Reviews for Mandolin Moon: Ben 10 Edition
gazza chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
That was an awesaome story!
HiroLemonFan chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I think the song choice should have been 'A Little Faster' by There for Tomorrow.
friends and p-f4ever chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
it was good. except why did Ben have to introduce kevin and gwen to julie? didn't kevin drive ben and julie to their first date?
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
WE YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE IT, YOU'RE AWESOME YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Lexii-chan chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I love it! XD Write more! Your a natural! I would LOVE to read more Gwevin and Benlie from you! Keep on writting, Green Gallant!

~Alexa
SPNAngel16 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
aw how cute
kittiekat10105 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
LOL! Write another one wih Gwen and Julie singing this time!
Pink Ikawa 001 chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
i really liked this oneshot! amusement park stories are my favorite kind. and you did an excellent job with the romance, not too much and not too little. And the scrambler scene? very original! i dont know what the song was, but now im gonna look for it, cause it sounded awesome. Who could have ever imagined Ben and Kevin sharing a stage without fighting? it would have been impossible to believe a year ago. kudos on this creation.
1000GreenSun chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Great fic! Kevin getting sick from roller coasters lol! I love Gwevin/Kwevin and Ben/Julie, so naturally this fic really interested me. Keep up the good work! :)
soso127 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
That was great! I loved it! Whats the name of the song?
LT8 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
hrmm... I haven't seen a country fair in... forever? I'm sure they have them around KC somewhere (though I haven't gone to any) almost makes me want to write a fic about them going to World's of Fun... Good job! Though I can't really ever see Kevin doing that... that would make for a great idea for an episode! And i would be laughing my head off... anyway for the good job, here's a digital cookie. *sends and invisible, non-edible cookie to you.)
PenguinsHockey14 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Loved it!
helikesitheymikey chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
aw...CUTE!

i love it! good job!
PhinalPhantasy chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Great job on this one buddy! I thought Ben and Julie were very cute and I felt for poor Kevin getting all sick, but the image of him and Ben doing Karaoke together was kind of funny in my head. It shows they're definately no longer enemies.