This story was harrowing, it had everything a good story should and your writing style is one that just drags a reader in, completely immersing them in the fiction you have created.

This was beautiful and compelling. I really don't know what else to say, everything was wonderful. The last line was a perfect ending.

Wow. This was amazing. Just amazing...

Awesome job. I love this story. Very well done.

bbissocute

Awesome beyond words. Very nice. Possibly the best Atem sealing stories I have read.

WOW!

O.O DAMN!...that was DEEP! I applaud you for writing this amazing fic, which struck straight to the core of the heart and mind. This was a brilliant work of art! You must make more, as you DEFINATELY have the imagination, tools and extravagant words! *favorite!*

Oh dude that was AWESOME! n.n Very nicely written, nice way to get into his head, everything! n.n I started reading the Yugioh manga lately...the TV series sucked... I mean geez! n.n Lol. However, I really like this. n.n

Beautifully written, I got chills as I was reading it. A true Gem. excellent job!

Awe. Some.

That was... well, it was fantastic. Absolutely, irreversibly fantastic. I have to leave, so I can't leave a really long review, which you deserve, but just know that this was absolutely incredible. I loved it.

Randon Note: Weren't Atem's eyes originally crimson? I think so. Doesn't matter - AWESOME work.

Okay, gotta go. Beautiful writing. Thank you.

-Kayura

Wow! This is just shattering!

Awesome, awesome story!

Woah.

I am trying to think of something to say that isn't just 'omg good job yo', but curse me for reading this immediately upon waking. You pulled off a lot of things I usually can't stand, and also gave some amount of justice to the sacrifice of the name. itself.

M. I liked this. Thank you for sharing it.