I have melted completely. Utterly. This is such a beautiful and exquisite story. You've done all the pairings justice. I like the way you wove the past and the future, filling in the gaps beautifully.

I'm only half way through this story, but I wanted to say that this is a lovely chapter.

Thank you for such a wonderful story! I enjoyed reading it.

I really enjoyed reading this, wonderful job.

SO SWEET!

GAH

*skips around*

First of all, you write a *hell* of a love note!

This was fabulously wonderful. I absolutely loved it. Oh skippy damn yay.

And NOW I can go read what you have been writing on LJ and NOW I can POKE you about WRITING MOAR!

Hooray for Japanese Big Eyed Porn!

*loves*

Yay!

*music swells*

Oh.

the kiss.

I approve.

Do I start every review with the word "oh"?

!

Oh. How I love you.

Okay, obviously this Dan/Ace dude is a new character. We'll have to talk about him.

Oh Kunzite...

*bawls*

These are getting sadder and sadder and sadder. Por Jadeite...

I've never put together before that she is Jupiter, and yet she listens to trees, and he is of Earth, and yet he listens to the stars.

Very lovely. She was heartbreaking here. She wants to be soft ever so much more than Ami does right now...lol.

Oh most excellent. A vision of and understanding of Zoisite that I haven't had before now. Difficult for him to quell that arrogance, isn't it? And yet he *is* humbled. I imagine that there is depth to each of the guys characters that have been brought about by the realization of what they could stoop to.

Bravo.

Yeah, I'm goign to like this, even if it brings up questions. I *like* Venus like this...I knew she'd be kick ass.

Did this play out in cannon? Were there periods of time when the Senshi did not trust the Shitenneou? It seem more *real* that there would be. To have been betrayed, twice, by the one who should love you the most seems almost unforgivable.

I'm very much looking forward to the encounters between the others.