Wow. To say this was beautiful would be an understatement. You put so much emotion into it. Thank you. :)

wow. that was a really wonderful story.. i loved it!

OH it should have happened like this. Other than a few typos, this was a great oneshot. Good job!

-Celestia White

AWW...I loved it...

This is just wonderful. It's sweet, sexy, angsty, sad, so fast paced that I could have read ten times as much (I think I've already lost count of how many times I've read it). You have an amazing way with words, Matriaya. I love all your other Robin Hood stuff too. And it's a simple thing, and it took me a while to work out if it was on purpose, but I love that you have replaced 'kissed' with 'killed' ("He killed her once more, long and sweet.") OOH. SWOON. Just glorious! TQ xx

BEAUTIFUL. Honestly. And I love the title you finally came up with! Much better than anything I suggested. You are such a talented writer and I am proud to say I'm your beta. May you get many more reviews!

Wow. Just... wow. This was lovely and sweet and sad and... and... just really amazing. I love your angry!Will-it fits so perfectly. This is a wonderful story.

Great story. Very sad and sweet and wonderful.

LOL I think all Will/Djaq shippers were confused after Will's act of locking Djaq in a cupboard.

It certainly would have been nice if Will had fuelled his insane passion into kissing Djaq, rather than killing the Sheriff ;)

Your descriptions are brilliant - they portray each characters feelings very well.

"the star-broken darkness" - I really like this phrase, it's pretty :)

-x-

Wow! that was beautiful! Thank you for sharing that thought, it was a good interpretation of that moment! :)

I LOVE it! Well written, AND Will/Djaq action perfect.

I loved some of your descriptions. This:

"If she had fought back, as her instincts normally demanded, she may have found herself at the mercy of Will’s crushed morals."

was possibly my favourite. I love the 'crushed morals' phrase. A brilliant way to describe how he was feeling.

Great work!

beautifully written, and it's the thumbs up for me as it is Will/Djaq- so yey! And the angsty Will Scarlett made me swoon.

So cute.

x

Brilliant. I liked it :)

Mira.