Ohh I love this story please continue with more characters, or a sequel to this story.

She is pregnant nice! I bet the baby will be cute! I wonder if gaara will propose

They are so cute together

seriously, what did Shukaku do?

10 years is a long time but I enjoy this story I think you are being creative with this story it has its own uniqueness and it's great they are starting to feel comfortable with each other and the worst is over with yay hopefully the update won't be to long

Well that was hot sex and wait does that mean she is pregnant

So they are a bit weird interesting but weird

this is hilarious, shikaku giving love advise

I really like how this story is progressing, it's amazing. I wouldn't mind seeing how you would change the beginning! Update when you can.

YOu only got one review? But this is awesome !

Please keep writing cause a) I think it's amazing and b) naruto manga ended

what kind of friend spills that kind of secret? rosanna's an absolute idiot

oh wow it's back.
hi. ;P

Then Shikamaru had and urge to talk of his shirt, he did and threw it to the floor.
I think you mean take.

Behind her was her 'posy' of 3 more girls wearing the same thing laughing at the torment that was about to happen.
I think You mean posse.

Kayla looked bored but Rosanna retorted, "Well I never thought I would see you sluts in the haunted forest." A smirk playing at her lips but she tried to keep a strait face.
I think you mean straight.
...sorry I'm a spelling nazi.

Great Story!

Thumbs Up!

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