Reviews for Harry Potter and The Power of The Coven
Veronica McClure chapter 7 . 9h
In book canon, Harry was described as having gotten at least as tall as Ron by the time they were sixteen.
Veronica McClure chapter 5 . 14h
A faster way would have been to call on Dobby. Just saying.
Veronica McClure chapter 4 . 16h
Correction: the fanfic I mentioned in a previous comment was entitled "A Father's Sin" not "Sins of the Father".
Veronica McClure chapter 4 . 16h
Good premise. Though there was another earlier fanfic entitled,Sins of the Father", it had a similar backstory for Severus and Harry there too. But without the Coven.
hawkswench chapter 50 . 5/28
Well this is a curve ball as you haven't really talked about the animgi at all.
hawkswench chapter 57 . 5/28
Well it has been almost a year since you rewrote chapter 13. If you are planning on rewriting the whole story before adding any new chapters, I am going to take the guess that this story will never be finished then. I didn't realize until now that chapter 57 was a note. I am now on chapter 47 so I am not sure if I should just keep reading or not and if I should put your story on follow.
Netchka chapter 57 . 10/27/2019
Really looking forward to finding out what happens next. Great story so far.
Netchka chapter 50 . 10/27/2019
WOW! Harry's a BIG Pheonix. What a way to find out!
VizeerLord chapter 57 . 8/13/2019
yeah.

minor grammer issues. homophones, dropped 's', and even dropped words break up the flow of this masterpiece. a rewrite is a big order.

question; what would happen to your story line if James had blood adopted Harry, to secure the 'Line'. Black does the same in many other fics to lock Harry in as Black... just an idea so we can keep calling him Potter rather then Snape.

more please
VizeerLord chapter 26 . 8/9/2019
ok, question; if Harry is the son of Snape... how is he potter? did James blood adopt him?
SunshineDarkTree chapter 57 . 5/20/2019
I adore this so far. I hope you do post more.
Chyllen chapter 1 . 5/20/2019
I've read 11 chapters but sorry I can't continue .. not your fault your writing is good
It's two things that hey me in any story first is constantly changing POV that and it's supposed to be a Harry Potter story and if he is not the main character then why write a Harry Potter story
lilyflower50 chapter 57 . 4/30/2019
more please love to see this finished
exiledseaprince chapter 40 . 4/17/2019
I don’t really get Harry’s and Hermione’s relationship I mean Hermione has to comment on everything he does and he just agrees and grins in accordance with what she says and even when he doesn’t listen to what she says he goes out of the way to placate her I’m as confusing and full of holes as Hermione says James Potters and Lily’s relationship is but I like everything else but this is my opinion but I’m not an author though most due to getting bored of it
smcmillon906 chapter 1 . 3/30/2019
is the rewrite still in progress?
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