Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

After so many year later I came across this lovely fanfic! It’s so detailed and so well written! I had a really nice time reading this.

That was a great story I enjoy reading it.

Awesome story! I would have loved to see Kara and/or Jason old enough to join their dad and be introduced to the world, but it was still a perfect ending.

I enjoy this was a great story.

I though this was a great story.

In April of this year one of my fans recommended this story on my Facebook group. At the time I logged it in my to-read list. On August 30th I started reading it. Part-way through I began to grow suspicious I had read it previously. Your idea of the crystal grown underground transport system was very distinctive. Sure enough I found a short entry on how much I enjoyed the story in my previous logging system. I enjoyed the story even more the second time. I will go recommend it to my fans. I'm not sure why this wonderfully detailed story doesn't have more readers.

The level of detail you put into the story and your explanations bridging the gap between previous movies and Superman Returns make this story positively delightful. It's definitely one of my favorite stories. Thank you for taking the time to write and share.

I really enjoy reading this great work on it.

I have really enjoy reading this great work on it.

Very good story I have enjoy reading it great job on it.

Louis is such a bitch to Richard. I dunno why they are still together. No one would ever take that much shot without blowing up. Sorry, but the Louis on this storie is acting very bad. Like a child and a freaking bitch!

Is it weird that, even though this is a "Superman Returns" fic I'm imagining Perry as Lawrence Fishburne? Heck, Clark is still Reeves in my head, and for some reason Lois is Terri Hatcher (but Dean Caine is never Clark).

Out of the mouths of babes!

Well, this is really going to complicate things for the adults in the room.

I'm really enjoying this story, and I can't wait for Lois and Clark to realize that the reason for the different timestamps on the equipment is that it wasn't just one EMP, but a bunch of them, growing in power.

One of the best stories I have ever read.