So sad. I really (perversely) liked it. Especially how you portrayed Warren. He's Always sort of reluctantly doing the right thing and it fits. And I love how the story is super tragic, but you managed not to make it melodramatic.
It was lovely.

such a beautiful piece. Love this

WOW. I'm sort of speechless after reading this.

It was brilliant, and I loved the way you didn't make Warren all OOC and mushy and whatever else, and yet still give him emotions.

And Layla doing that for him, just... wow.

Absolutely loved it!

Excellent work! Really enjoyed reading it. :)

wow...

love this...

I'm confuesd. Did Warren love Layla? That's sad.

WOW! that was quite impressive. ]

wow, that was deep. especially the repetition of dying for someone you love, but that making a memory so em-blazed in them that they can't love again. truly, a wowing read for something short. better quality than quantity.