| Reviews for Pivot: Part II of The Concurrence Arc |
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   nozomi-NN-chan chapter 1 . 3/24/2019 Omg this second part was beautiful, I loved to read how they meet! |
| keepsakeatlas chapter 1 . 3/3/2019 This made me tear up oh my god, perfection. |
| freckledizuku chapter 1 . 10/30/2016 AHH SO GOOD |
| Tuesday'sHere chapter 1 . 6/25/2016 Gggaaahhhh I am a failure I didn't comment on the first one even though it was awesome, forgive me! Both of these, I freaking loved them! Funny and deliciously dirty but also so damn tender and loving how do you fit it all into a one-shot? Absolutely wonderful I am super happy that you wrote these and posted them for us to read, thank you for that! |
| Tuesday'sHere chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 Gggaaahhhh I am a failure I didn't comment on the first one even though it was awesome, forgive me! Both of these, I freaking loved them! Funny and deliciously dirty but also so damn tender and loving how do you fit it all into a one-shot? Absolutely wonderful I am super happy that you wrote these and posted them for us to read, thank you for that! |
| logo.schwartz chapter 1 . 4/13/2016 I first read this years and years ago, and it's stuck with me every since. I could read this story a thousand times and it still makes puts me through the emotional roller coaster, from panting horny to tearful happy. You're an incredible writer - very few people capture the pain and joy of emotional vulnerability in entire novels, let alone a short piece of fanfiction. I hope that even if you've left fanfiction behind that you're still creating stories. |
| Travesti chapter 1 . 1/8/2016 I wasn't expecting that solution! Awesome story! I'd love to read a longer story if you decide to extend it! |
| coworly chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 Ugh that was perfect. I just loved how you conveyed the intensity of their emotions. |
| MilkyRuu chapter 1 . 6/7/2014 Oh my god I just so.. Speechless This is so beautiful So deep and not just a hot steamy sex My heart clenching when sasuke crying And the end of the story was so fluffyyy So sweet Sasuke just so adorable And Naruto, I don't how it is, he just like a perfect boyfriend Ugh.. You both just let me kiss you! I don't know what to comment anymore And sorry for bad english |
| Question chapter 1 . 4/2/2014 Wait... So what happened to Sai & Deidara? Is the cheating still continuing or did they cleanly broke up? |
| LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 2/4/2014 This was so beautiful! Sasuke really loves him |
| minasuka-chan chapter 1 . 7/25/2013 ok, so here is my comment: i absolutely loved it! it has the perfect mix between sweet and sexy! im a huuuge fan of naruto taking over and this one was absolutely one of my favorites! u made my day! :) |
| HavenCraze chapter 1 . 12/6/2012 D'awww! I loves it! Teehee How it went from got sex to deeper meanings. So good |
| kazoe chapter 1 . 6/7/2012 I read both parts but I like this better cause you show more of their relationship. |
| Phantasium chapter 1 . 5/2/2012 Perfect ending, I'm amazed! You really portrayed the emotions well and I loved it! |
