Very nice! You did rather well for your first one. Loved the interactions.

i really wished there was a conversation like this in the game!

This was your very first? :O I am in awe of your skill.

And I really really enjoyed the fanfic. Marvelous. I thought you wrote all the characters really well.

Overalls...not what I'm thinking. Suspenders yes, not overalls.

Wonderful story; more in character than OOC, if my little time playing the game gives me any authority.

Ow ! That was very cute ! _

But that's a little sad too...

You wrote it very well !

Congrats !

You ought to enable anonymous reviews, it makes those of us who are usually too lazy to sign in happy. :-)

Anyway, I really enjoyed this story. The Lloyd/Kratos relationship is one of my favorite aspects of the game and I can't get enough of the father/son moments. I'd love to see this story continued. Get an insider's glimpse into their minds and hearts throughout the story as it were.

That just warms my heart!

Oh i ADORE KratosLloyd fluff! :D SKYA! n.n

I've found that stories that are the spawn of boredom are often the ones that are written the best. .

As for how OoC people were ... nobody was, really. KRatos seems like he rally would loosen up around Lloyd, and want to look after him. The Raine-cooking situation made me laugh, and its totally in character for her. XD And Lloyd was awesome. Go Lloyd!

Nice go on your first fic!

~Li-chan

Aw... That was so Kawaii!

I love Kratos and Lloyd fluff. It wasn't too OOC or long. It was perfect.

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I hope that you'll write more for me to read, because there really isn't enough on here.

Loved it, and keep it up.