Aah this is fantastic, I love seeing the lovely caring side of Sirius it's such a change :-)

This was the best ans smuttiest story i have ever read. God i loved it i reeally Did. I love that it started out as a bet, i love that Sirius threw the bet, i love that it was revenge in the beginning for her and i love that they both fell for each other,

I love that Remus always knew Sirius liked Sarah and I love the necklace he gave her. I really loved this :)

Smut and humor, this fic is tremendous! I laughed so hard at Remus' remarks. I liked how well you pulled off the conversations between the guys. They sound real, which is hard to find in fanfictions; their conversations come out a bit forced at times. Lovely fic! This has become one of my favorites.

Awwwww. Sweet ending :) I really appreciate that you didn't drag out the whole thing and make them fight over petty topics. Well written. And the smut - mwah, darling! Could make a nun blush ;)

Keep it up in future. And I'll bet you have plenty of love left over for your husband - especially if he's the sexual inspiration for this story!

-Chanelle

Hahahaha, nice twist - Remus has previously dated target-girl. Still enjoying your story :)

Good beginning, I like your sense of humour. And for some reason, dirty jokes coming through all the time makes the scenario more believable :)

I really like how Sarah was a lot smarter than just a silly fan girl, or even a Mary Sue. I really liked how her character had a crush on Sirius, but didn't let that completely take over her personality. I like how you portrayed both her and Sirius' inner conflicts with the bet, I feel like that was very relatable. I also approve of this story's length, I know that's a silly comment, but I've read some stories like this that just drag on and on and I feel like sometimes there's only so much that can be told so I'm glad you didn't try and drag this on beyond reason. All in all, great story, I really enjoyed it!

Loved the story! Great OC too! Thankee!

yes, its complete, i know...but this is really good! And i like that Peter has a girlfriend lol:)

absolutely beautiful.

great storyy! 10/10 :)

wow...just..wow... a great end to the story I must say! you had me laughing, and crying the whole way! sarah's character is just like the characters I've been trying to find for my sirius..and you struck gold with her. I'm very pleased to have read your story, and now, after reading it all I'm reviewing it. keep writing, because your very good at it. p.s. I LOVE the cute little sex snipits, i've been trying to include them in mine, but I was hesitant and couldn't figure out where to put them at. You've done great job, if you dont mind, could I ask you to make a jacob black fanfic, i hve quite the character you could use. I'm just not as great at writing as you are, and would love for you to write it for me.

send me an email if your up to the challenge.

thanks for the story!

~Samantha aka-michigansweety88

I read this a while ago and saw a story with a somewhat similar plot and thought of this.

It tooke me a few HOURS to find it

But I finally did

SO I am going to add it to my favorites :)

Just to let you know... :)

Aw! Great story-this is the first one I've read that had an OC as a main character, and I really, really liked it. A lot. *Sigh* Sirius makes my toes curl. For reals.

Great story, well done, you're awesome!

I was searching for a good Sirius/Oc story and then I stumbled upon this one.

That was a really good Sirius/Oc story. Really really good.

-Barbara