this was sooo goood

I loved this. 3

WOW! this is so good!, It's hard to believe it's your first! I really like it!

cheers :)

janee

That was really good. Like, really good.

Sorry for the crappish review. I'm just really tired. But o hwell.

I'm gonna add you, since it was so good. If i remember, I'll go look at your page sometime.

ALohas!

Aw thats so sad and so sweet

what a bittersweet oneshot

I love it now we all know what he though

the last moments of his life

This story was so beautiful. You portrayed him so well. Good work.

this was so beautiful i feel ur pain just believe in yourself and u can achevie it

aw...so sad, and yet so sweet.

That was absolutly riveting. I almost cried. Almost.