I swear, this made me cry for a fifth time today. (all the others were also because of fan fiction)

That was so sad, but it was really sweet. :)

Pretty good start. Awesome song by the way. But first off, Draco living with Harry and Ginny is just wierd. I know they become friends at the ends, but still. Maybe living next to them would be better, but it's your story. Give the kid's name when he's talking about finding out Ginny was pregnant and some more details.

wow good job you beat me. :) love ya see you at school