Aw, that was bittersweet. Can't say I almost cried unlike other readers, but it was cute. Very. Want to give Cloud a big hug, poor thing.

This is so touching. I almost cried. ;_; Poor little Cloudy. . .

This was a very well written oneshot! It even made me cry along with Cloud. You did very well with this.

It's so sad. I cried while I read this. So sad and good. I like it.

I've only ever read a few pieces of ZackCloud, but...wow. This is just indescribable. Normally I would object to the emotions Cloud's displaying, but the way you portray it just makes sense. Logical. The tone and the feeling of the entire work just fit. Keep it up! Hope to read more. :)

This is very well written. I love Cloud's reaction to the journal entries!

aww...this is so beautiful, one of the best of the pairing I've read, and this is my favourite pairing. You are a very talented writer.

Very nice. You brought out the characters perfectly for the situation. Is there going to be more?

That was simply beautiful.

So...

Just wow.

It left me completely speechless and that's not just an excuse to get out of writing a useful review.

Just... wow.

BV