brill! :-)

I"m definitely up for an epilogue! that was a great story! too short, but still amazing! great job!

Good story.

I can't help but envy poor Jennifer as she drops shirtless into Ronon's arms.

why did she argue to herself about letting go or not anyway? LOL

great story

I enjoyed this one and hope you do an epilogue to it also! Love that Jen was the one to be able to help fix the problem. Liked that Ronon took care of her ouchie, also. :-)

"He met her lips fast but kissed her slowly"

Okay THAT was definitely my favourite phrase... it's all *whew* and *fans herself*. It says so much about Ronon - blunt and to the point just like the man himself! I also like how the solution was so simple, then they're both killing time. And how you turned the tables by having Ronon play Doctor this time. Light and simple, but very caring. I'd definitely love to see a little follow up - maybe even a wee tidbit? Puhleese? Oh heck. Fine. I'll say it. Just write more R/K and I'll be happy!

“Ready?” he asked, careful not to take liberties with touching her without permission.

I really liked this sentence. It totally shows his "gentlemanly" side that often gets missed in stories. It's great how you actually made a point of bringing that part of his character to light, although sometimes (the romancer in me) thinks he'd probably skip that for Jen since she's so shy! :P

And Jen's little rant at the end of this chapter is so true to her... she would totally be arguing with herself about just letting go and landing in her bra!

very nice as always. :D

Very good ! Loved it. Loved Ronon bandaging Jen up for a change and how she disarms him with her smile. And Jen saying she didn't want to go off world with his team anymore- because something always happens- and how she could make money on bets about the team or Ronon.- too funny. Unruly black hair- awesome way to describe Shep. Loved it!

Love it :D

*happy giggle* I LOVE this chapter! Yes, do please give us an epilogue, okay? *hopeful look*

I like it, good. She is really sweet here :)

Interesting story, I liked how their roles were reversed. As for a possible epilogue, I would love to read it whenever it gets posted.