That was good.

Although Harry did teach, it's too bad he didn't return to S Dak. teaching the tribe. It's hard to believe they could simply return to the old life without real regret. What ever happened to the Grangers? No one seems to remember them after sending them to Australia. Harry would make a wonderful father.

Loved it

Don't pay any attention to those trolls who tell you your writing sucked. They're just jelous cause their own writing sucks b*lls and nobody's dum enough to read their shit. This was very enjoyable. Thank you for taking the time to write i 3

I was't sure at first that I would like this story. The while Mpreg thing bothers me for obvious reasons. The things Harry went though is tragic, beyond words. But i do have questions.
1) How did the death eaters get inside the house? I thought the whole reason for Harry being there was to hide/protect him self from Tom and his followers. I guess they were gone when Albus died, or something?
2) Were Pansy, Bellatrix and Umbridge meant to get pregnant? Or was it just fun raping Harry? I was kinda expecting Harry to go after them and take back (rescue?) his children from them.
3) What the Hell was up with Molly, Ginny and Ron?! There reaction came out of nowhere!
4) Not a Question. Looking at Harry three son's, he kinda gets a lot from them. From Percy, Harry gets the Weasley's as a family by blood. From Lucius, the Malfoy title if Draco is dead or locked up. From Snape, (as much as I hate it) is now apart of Lily (and James)...forever. But Harry can teach his sons to have a sense of humor.
Keep up the great work man!

Thanks

Good story

A different twist. Your writing style is good.

This kind of crap is NOT okay.

That was interesting.

Well done. The ending was a bit too fast as if you were loosing interest and wrapping up loose ends. Very much like that they kept the cabin and used it.

Thanks, I like it :-)

Nice going.

An interesting idea, the male pregnancy. You do a fine job of drawing a Harry who has his own set of priorities and his own moral compass, who will not be swayed from doing the right as he sees it.

You have a wonderful Hermione here too, one who also has her priorities straight. She shows how combining magic and technology make the whole greater than the sum of its parts. You bring in another theme of yours, the accidental engagement that neither regret.

Standing Wolf is a nice OC, and I like the role he plays.

You draw the delusional Weasleys well. At a time when they shouldn't be looking farther than Percey's betrayal and how to support Harry, they look to their own self interest and OBHWF fantasies instead. Harry's response might not be the best, but frankly, his reaction could have been far worse.

Ending Voldemort was neat and economical. Fitting to have him and the fathers in Azkaban as squibs.

Now Harry, Hermione and their children can live, not just survive.

TGM

Nice story
Enjoyed it