Yes, Kevin does seem fun to write! You did an excellent job of him! He was so obviously jealous in 'All That Glitters.' Beautiful depiction of that!

Nice nickname for Morningstar, by the way. xD

Enjoy this story. I love Kevin's thoughts about Mike.

Wonderful job! You write Kevin's perspective very well and I enjoyed reading this. I see what you mean that Mike is like Jet. I never noticed that before. Anyway, good job.

Twilight Phantom Dragon

Great story but Why don't u like Gwevin? :( Okay well like I said it's your choice but that's good that u hate Mike cuz I do Oh, here's a good name 4 Mike what about TinkerBell? 2 me he really looks like a Tinkerbell.

Cute ending. I liked it.

lol that was cute! good job!

you're serious. u dont like gwevin? hmm... anyway... great fic. i really like it. check out my story. morningstar comes back in it. so yeah. tell me what you think

You don't like Gwevin? You write Kevin's PoV so well! And I hate Morningstar too!

I agree, Jet and Twinklepoop both deserve every misfortune that befalls appaun(sp?) them, espiecally Twinklepoop. (Is it okay if I use that name from now on?) Except Jet, I feel kind of bad for. Just as he sees the error of his ways and helps the gaang out in earnist (sp?), he gets killed by Long Feng (The Dai Lee boss).

Awesome! -smacks Mike too-

I haven't seen this Alien Force episode- Awesome fic by the way! I'm a sucker for Gwevin fics! XD

yes! He is just like Jet! great work. we need more alien force gwevin writers out there.

-MWTKL

omg i agree totally on the Jet thing! lol and this was an awesome story! there just isn't enoght Gwevin around here. *sigh* ah well. this was good, though.

agreed fully on the mike and jet thing! I only started liking gewn and kevin pairings during alien force so i understand why you may not be a fan. still i think this is a very well written fic and really get into the head of kevin during the entire episode.

I enjoyed this; I think you wrote Kevin's perspective very well. My only complaints would be technical things, such as starting a new paragraph any time someone new speaks. Also the Author's Note in the middle of a paragraph is rather jarring and can take your reader out of the story you're trying to submerge them in.

*snickers at a/n*

I really liked this one shot...so...does that mean if there are any other OCs*oddcharacters.* that are crushing on either K or G you'll do another oneshot to like bash them or something? I hope so cause this one was really good!