Nawat is so cute! That's SO how he would write, too. How endearing!

hah! i guessed right!

sweet. ecpesially considering their beginings.

i thought that was actually rather good...

more jon abt alanna AND thayet

oh ew!

neals poetry is supposed to be ATROCIOUS

what? NO!

tho i thought it was neal abt kel in the beginning

the BEGINNING gave it away. cute

thats cute. very nice

The mention of crows kind of gave it away. Aly/Nawat is really sweet, though. I love the crow-man. My neighbourhood crows just wander in the opposite direction than the one I'm coming from. Not bad at all. The poetry's no worse than mine. That is, when I create poetry.

Aly has hazel eyes the same as george

thank you thank you thank you

that was awesome

I LOVED it

It's so subtle and cool

At the start i almost felt like i peeked into a room and as my eyes adjusted to the light i could see what was inside.

brilliant

the last couple of lines were my favourites

'it still chases away the dark, but it illuminates only memories'

so beautiful

I adore this story. Your poetry is as good as your stories which are pure brilliance. I Wish I could write poetry like you.

ok, i'll be quiet now.

Beautiful, beautiful! This one is so full of heart-breaking longing, my eyes filled up with tears. Great to see you updating again! Keep writing! :D

Hah! I guessed it! I'm so clever! JK. I am smug. Very good. Pretty, and sad.