Updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

love this story. next chapter please?

Good Chapter!

Great I love it
When will we continue?
Must be that Naruto have a Harem that he is composing in addition to Hana, Anko, Blaze, Tsume, Ingrid that there is more Mei, Kurenai, Yugao, Samui, Yugito, etc except for Hinata When all the women of the Harem fuck with him and get pregnant with their first time with Naruto huh?

Keep going! Love it!

Isnt naruto rich asf since his from two huge clans he can just pay of the debt or fight saskue for hana hope u update

Wonderful come the next chapter.

I love this story keep the good work

I hope for more chapters very soon

Yo great story... I've gotta say though, it's kinda hard to read with the errors that pop up all over... not gonna rant about that cuz ya probably already know this and had other 'comments' (Flamers) pointed out that, again, you've always known about. I mean it's obvious that they have all the right to put you down cuz your grammar, and I quote, "sukz"... the hypocrisy they show is as f'ing hilarious as they are lonely, despondent, and pathetic cowards whom should try to take the time to do what any and all authors of FanFiction have been doing for as long as this site has existed, and if they're gonna f'ing complain so damn much, they should become an f'ing beta for the site... wait scratch that last comment, that would probably be the absolute end of many of the authors for these peons are too busy being jealous pricks to try to solve the problems they have... meaning they hate anyone who is good at something and want them to quit... Argh! I told myself I wouldn't rant but I did so anyway... why dost ye forsake me mine subconscious conscious... (SMACK!) Sorry... my apparent Deadpool-esque in...sanity...(?) aside, you have a great plotline that I foresee a greater story being born from... so What I'm trying to get at is to keep up the great work... I've only ever read the best stories, though VERY seldom do I POST a REVIEW of the stories I've read. Those are the ones who've caught my PERSONAL attention.
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Dragoon Of Darkness...
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Ja-ne!
Kami-Kitsune-Kage

Good story please update soon!

will you update?

he either gambles or uses his birthright to pay for the debt
yes, but only a day or two, yeah, of course, and save the village
yes
(ichoosenottoanswer)
i wrote you a half decent plot, now UPDATE

Damn good but I suggest you pick 3 stories or less to focus on.

Hope to read more soon.

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