Oh, Nate, if only you knew

That was hot and a bit perverse in true Chair style!

I like your story :)

I like it !

Awesome!

Too bad this is just a one-shot . . . I'd love to see where things go from here.

please do continue your story.. it's interesting

OMG! SO HOT!

I can't believe this was your first attempt at writing smut! Very well done! Please write more

for CB.

Loved the parallel with CB/NS.

This was brilliant. I loved it!

Haha, Bass that dirty devil! Very hot scene ;)

twas very good. blair couldve had a wicked comeback after they were done, but its not TOO ooc. i applaud you :D

loveed the nate/serena parallel you incorporated! nice writing！

This is in no way terrible, nor is it smut. My first thought, skimming it over...wow. This is really good. You are a rather accomplished writer of smut if you want to characterize it that way. I loved the raw emotion. I thought it was genuine except for two bits

Here...

With his free hand, Chuck took a fistful of Blair’s chocolate-colored hair and pulled her face towards his roughly.

“And she rode him hard.”

Chuck gripped Blair’s hips and she slid onto him, making his head fall back against the leather. She slowly, carefully adjusted her body until her legs were draped around his waist.

And here...

We had sex again.

Nate’s going to kill me.

But, fuck, she was amazing.

He looked up just in time to see Blair inspecting the torn black material that had once been a whole article of clothing. She wrinkled her nose in disgust and crushed the ripped underwear into a ball.

...Otherwise, this was rather well-written taken from a romance novel standpoint. You managed to keep them in character, keep you voice as a writer consistent and apparent without overwhelming the story, create a believable and interesting plot. Your choice in details "perfectly manicured fingernails, etc." was masterful and enhanced the story greatly. I'm very impressed and look forward to reading more from you in the future.

Much love, Cat

P.S. Feel free to check out my stories.

this was really good!

you should keep going with it!

please write more BC, this was too good