draco is such a gentleman!

your writing is lovely but i'm going to be honest, they're relationship is straight up textbook toxic.

I don't understand, when she knew she would leave before the Yacht set sail, why was she with a luggage? not hating or anything but I don't follow.

Fabulous!

I really love the story but I wish Hermione had more of a backbone

"We are now officially in heave"-HUH? Ok, so no beta yet, then.

Eh, I"m not interested in reading a badly edited story glorifying an absolve man being a misogynic, overbearing bastard to a woman in his employ.

"But what she head of that he was a fire-breathing dragon according to people in the know." Huh?
"look ate"?
Argh, can you make up your mind about what tense you're writing this in? Past or present, one OR the other, not both, please.
Oh, honey, I hope you found a beta for upcoming chapters.

what is this lame shit

yo how did that convo turn around in a nanosecond wtf

I kinda wanna punch her in the face. Man up women

i loved your portraying of draco

Damn keep up the good work

Draco, you can't just proposition her and expect it to work. She's Hermione Granger; strong, confident, and above that. I like this a lot. It's nice.

This was a really fun romance story to read. Thank you for sharing!

So "doormat Hermione" and "rapey asshole disrespectful jerk Draco" is what you think is romantic?