Madame Pomfrey? The nurse from Harry Potter? Oh, you sly dog, you... sneaking in a reference to the best book series ever... bravo.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~!

That had to be the CUTEST Colloyd story ever! I was grinning like a Cheshire cat through the whole thing. Ah, young love. How sweet and innocent:)

I... have got to check my email more often. Sorry for abandoning you last time *sweatdrop*

.GOSH! It's so fluffy! 3 Absolutely ADORABLE! I LOVED IT! Everything about this fic made me scream "Awwww!", it's just too cute for words! I can't even pick which part was my favorite, it was all so great! 3 Keep up the good work!

Sickeningly cute indeed :)

Aw so cute I loved it FLUFFYNESS ROCKS!

Such a cute story~ I just had to read it when I found it on the Tales Forums. Not many Colloyd fans out there, so I'm happy to see another one

I was smiling the whole time I was reading this.:D

It's so cute! ~,~ Gah, I want to write a fluffy scene now.

I don't remember if I saw anything that was out of character, but this: “I know that Lloyd and I like you too. We’re friends, right?”

and that whole scene was really IN character.

Yay, happiness. ~,~

DX AGH, THAT WAS SO CUTE. I am slain by the cuteness.

I love Colette so much~

Haha, aw, I love this fic! It's so sweet!

I love how Lloyd was oblivious to his own charm. The scene was awkward, but the good kind! It fit the characters perfectly. I could imagine the scenes as if they were really in the game. Zelos' character, as well as everyone elses was perfect! I loved it! Amazing story!

P.S: You refer to me as a girl, and I kill you. XD

Writing: A Passion of the Soul

Aw... Colloyd fluff is always awesome!

And teddy bears are such great opportunities for romance! I love the idea of the guy buying or winning a teddy bear for his girl... it just makes me wanna cry!

daar! that was so friggin cute!

i loved it, and you kept them both in character! :3

It was a very good and sweet story.

But Teddy Bears can hurt someone...

Don't you remember the Evil Toys from the Tower of Mana?

Well they're certainly in character. *smiles*

Hiya! I'm Goddess Martel from the Offical Tales forum. .~

I'm just known as ME on . XD

I love this story! It's so cute and so sugary sweet. XD

And the the characters were pretty acurate in it. Well, I'm adding it to my fav list. .

See you around.

kya~

that was so... CUTE!~

wow

dont worry about characterisations, it was p-e-r-f-e-c-t!

I love how Lloyd didn't know what "initiative" meant, it was so... Lloyd xD

And the "revelation" scene was so... so like them. the "I *really" like you", and Colette using the same words, and then they don't know what to do...

it was wonderful! D