Okay

102nd review to the wanabee bird-kid! (That's me if you haven't figured that out yet...)

This was weird coool awesome and just mind blowing it has seriously blown my mind... I am the 101 reveiwer I think

I love your style, and hey! I am your 100the reviewer[At least I hope so].

This was some great advice! And yes I wish people would actually give some thought into their writing and not make everything so cliche. And you have a great point, the whole story doesn't just have to be about Fang or Max it's always god to add in supporting characters with personalities that aren't out of character. Sorry for my rant :D

Your creeping me out. How on earth did you know what I've been doing for the past few weeks?! ; )

this made me laugh :)

Your story sucks. ;) jk jk. I am laughing so hard right now. Thanks for the advice. This was funny.

your story has inspired me to form the Anti-Cliche Crusade. Hermione has volunteered to make little badges with "ACC" printed on them, as long as I promise to endorse SPEW.
on another note, the most annoying cliche to me? Nudge as the over-bubbly, super-hyper, makeup-obsessed fashionista. *insert annoying game show noise here* WRONG! Nudge is just as tough as Max, just as feminist, just as strong. She's just a bit younger, that's all.
AND THAT CONCLUDES MY RANT. :)
Miss A

YAY I LOVED IT!
Sorry that was a little random (anything in all caps is), but yeah, THANK YOU FOR THE ADVICE! It means a lot!

That, was a good story.

Awesome! I totally envisioned this when I got my first few reviews: reader-friendly or writer-friendly was the big question.

Admittedly, Phoenix Fanatic brought me here. So much later.
But I do agree. I AGREE! :D

Um, yeah. this is pretty darn accurate.

Cheers!

IASN

I. Love. This.

It's TROLLTASTIC!

Thank you. The world of fanfiction needs to hear this message.