This dynamic is amazing and I love it. I love the Kaibas slowly adopting Yugi. I love it.

this was so cute! i loved it :)

Wonderful prequel to Shadows on the Nile! Very well written and I love how you wrote about their friendship and all the mishaps that happened along the way.

Awesome awesome awesome story love. You did an excellent prequel to Shadows on the Nile, and yet it can be read not as a prequel as well. Great job. I really enjoyed it.

A nice story of friendship,despite it AU-ish.

The gradual pace of their friendship is almost amusing to read in each chapter, the two occasions to have vomit and food dumped on Seto is just...indescribable.

An overall refreshing breath of air, and a nice, warm family piece.

Yay! Their partnership is already off to a fabulous start. And I really like their friendship dynamics. And it's just so coincidental that Yugi created Blue-Eyes White Dragon for Kaiba at the same time Kaiba made that dragon for Yugi. And I like how it still parallels the show with the Duel Disks and all. And I like the logo for their company. Equal partners. How wonderful.

Oh, I like the name. It's catchy. And yay, they're going to be partners in doing this. It's going to be so much fun.

Oh, and I loved the dragon that was made to represent Yugi. If there were any doubts about Yugi's inclusion with the Kaibas, that would erase them all.

I suppose I understand why Yugi would need time to make his decision, though everybody knew what he would choose in the end. Like he said, he would have to be stupid to choose someone else.

The puppy eyes of doom. I just love that. And poor Kaiba. He seems to have an affinity with getting food dumped on him. But I'm so happy for Yugi. He can now start realising his dream and get Duel Monsters going.

Oh cool. So Yugi is going to be the inventor of Duel Monsters here? Nice.

And Kaiba using Mokuba as a way to shield is his own feelings is so cute. He really is such a big softie.

It's good to see Mokuba and Yugi's friendship hasn't died any and I'm glad Yugi and Kaiba fixed up their miscommunication or lack of it.

How horrible. Poor Kaiba, and Mokuba of course. They have such a sad past. I'm glad Gozaburo's gone from their lives now.

On another note, Yugi's psychic powers are cool, though intimidating, letting him know all this stuff. I don't think I could handle it.

Very amusing chapter. I like how Mokuba and Yugi were teasing Kaiba. He really needs to loosen up. I like the dragon room. All the dragons there were amazing. Very cool.

Poor Yugi though, not being able to eat on his own. I don't think I would be comfortable asking people I'm not entirely close with for help though. If it was my family then it would be okay. Then again, Kaiba's already fed Yugi soup, so whatever.

And it seems Mokuba and Yugi are really good friends actually though they're different ages. That's good. How did they become friends though if Yugi and Kaiba never interacted before? They didn't just become instant friends after the kidnapping, did they? That seems a bit quick, especially since Yugi was out of it for a while at first.

It's nice to see a nicer side to Kaiba and not only towards Mokuba. He does value his employees and he isn't really that cold, even if he appears that way at times.

I also hope to see Mokuba and Yugi interact soon though it's good to know Mokuba's doing okay too. What about the rest of Yugi's friends from the show though? Are they not in this then?

Omigod! That wasn't good. I would so never want that to happen to me. Poor Yugi must be mortified, hurling all over Kaiba after he just fed him. Well, at least Kaiba left silently after that. Then again, they're going to meet again sometime. I hope things aren't too awkward then.

Now, Yugi's unconscious rambling before was a little worrying, but I'm glad it's over now.

Well, I've don't hate hospitals that much but I guess I can't really compare my situation to Kaiba's. To think that such a mistake could have been made though...I'm glad Yugi's getting better care now. But I'm assuming since Yugi's an adult that they have different ages, so how old are the three of them exactly?

Holy crap! Wow. Roland's words are so true. I would have been frozen in horror, but Yugi just jumped straight in there to save Mokuba when he didn't even have any protection for himself.

I hope he's okay. I suppose it's a good thing it's pretty much instinct to cover your head or he could have been hurt a lot worse.

The psychic awareness is interesting. Does Yugi feel when danger is approaching in general or was this a special situation?