great job wit this...loved Ronon not being able to explain quickly and sending that letter for Jen to find

John and Teyla are so astute about others and so clueless about themselves. Jennifer trying to avoid Ronon was very poignant.

John and Ronon's talk is very cute. Poor Ronon.

The poking fun at Rodney is great. Some really funny lines there. Ronon is so astute. He's totally picking up on John caring for Teyla even though John will never admit it. Ronon's pushed the two of them together from the beginning.

Very well done. I love the little hints all the way through about John and Teyla's relationship and how the two of them are subtly matchmaking the whole time for Ronon and Jennifer without either realizing it.

wow...this was really great!

Loved your story, thank you for it.

I love the ending, DG :D Great to start a day! The whole story was perfect. So, now I will be waiting for a sequel :)

Yeah! A happy ending. Thank you for a wonderful story. I enjoyed it very much.

hahahahaha that was AMAZING! i LOVE it!

Happy sigh. :)

Aw! that was cute

That's good :) But I still hope you finish the other one too. I understand, I cannot write positive stores aeven in a good mood... Waiting for more :)

Loved the chapter.

I like this chapter as well. I think she should let him out of hospital now so they can go on their date. LOL.